Magic Farmer Dara - 2nd Edition -2 Descriptions And Clarifications To The Novel

The action takes place in a fictional country - Small AN in the 21st century. In the era of the Tang dynasty, there was such a princ.i.p.ality, consisting of 8 other princ.i.p.alities belonging to the CAO KINGDOM.

In the novel there is not only information about agriculture, but also a little history, economics and philosophy.

Information on the clans, the relations.h.i.+p between the empires, were removed, since agriculture turns out to be a very thin sphere.

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This is a story about how difficult it is to live in the archaic world of the patriarchal communities and do business, as well as any business that can bring at least some steady profits.

The main literary hero is a graduate of a university, a history department. I decided to start farming, simultaneously open an online store and a farm store. In the course of the story, new and new ideas come to him, which he immediately implements. That helps the village to organize new tourist routes, then buys them a small hydroelectric station as they have electricity with interruptions. Along the way, supplements your budget by buying and selling products from mountain villages. He is helped by his family and acquaintances.

In the course of the history of Dara, that is the name of the protagonist, finds magical ent.i.ties, thanks to which his business begins to acquire curious properties. He is helped in this by his Bro from Chengdu, Fang.

The story also has its background, which began during the Tang era at the beginning of the 7th century.

While doing business on a farm or buying goods, Fang and Dara exchange ideas with each other about the world and everyday, everyday affairs, sometimes a little philosophy. But Dara immediately straightens herself.

Various events occur from Dara, and the magic component helps him to solve small problems that arise.

20 chapters or 282 pages or 95,000 words, just the beginning, the prologue of history ...

From the point of view of literary form, the text is not so beautiful, but from the point of view of content, this story is very interesting, as it contains interesting information about the history of the Silk Road region, and agriculture, geography, life, ethnography. Not to mention the peculiarities of regional cooking, the healing properties of vegetables, berries and fruits. There are recipes for healing desserts. Including the author's opinion interesting thoughts on the possibility of new lines of business development.

Presumably in this novel there will be from 300 chapters and maybe all 1000 ... there will be many inside those novels, but they will be connected with agriculture and trade in the sphere of agribusiness.

• Writing Quality is an average of 10 conventional points 3. But you can understand the general meaning. The literary form is lame, but the content is quite interesting. Since the author speaks the usual spoken language. With a beta reader, it would have gone better, but for now it's in search. Perhaps the author in the summer will be able to somewhat improve the grammar of writing a novel, as it will with time.

• Stability of Updates - 1 chapter in 2 days. Sometimes a chapter is small in 500 words per day, sometimes an average of 2000 words and sometimes a large one in 5000 to 6000 words.

• Story Development - history development is stable, there are excursions into historical epochs, reflections on economics, in short, history develops step by step. The first version had 107,000 words, consisted of 55 chapters, there were 35,000 readings in 2 months and about 60 entries in the library. But for some reason the first version was banned ... that is, the opportunity to promote it with the help of SS was lost and it disappeared from the list of "Original Works".

This novel in the second edition, reduced, reworked, part of the dialogues went away, it decreased 10,000 words. The total number of views decreased or, on the contrary, 3419 appeared in 2 days. The number of inclusions in the library is 5. Well, in the real world miracles and all sorts of unexpected situations can happen. You need to be prepared for this.

• Character Design - from 10 conditional b.a.l.l.s to 6 ... to be objective. Some characters are difficult to uncover, since they can affect the historical aspects of the confrontation between the two social systems during the Cold War, and this, as shown by the first edition of the novel, is fraught with a bath. So part of the literary fantasy heroes, will be less bright, in short will be without philosophy, more simple, in format so to speak. Simple guys, no c.o.c.kroaches in their head.

• World Background - the same garbage, so probably 3 of the possible 8. As they say on clothes, stretch and legs.

Why is it worth reading this novel? - It is useful to understand the mentality in the East, to know about the intricacies of doing business, there is interesting information about the history and traditions of the Silk Road. Medicinal cooking, new directions of tourism and farming. In any case, you can learn a lot of interesting information about the region of the Silk Road. The excess will not be, provided of course that the readers will be satisfied with the usual spoken English. To understand what is at stake is generally possible.

The overall a.s.sessment of the story, to be objective of 10 conditional points: if divided into the form and quality of literature and content. Then for the content I would put 10 points, since there are still no such stories devoted to the history of the Silk Road, and in terms of quality and form I would give 3.

That is, the arithmetic average will be 7.5 points ...

Well, something like this!

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Relatives and Friends Dara

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Dara - the main character

Great-grandfather Dara - an exiled farmer, from the village of "Terrible Poverty, when you hear it run right away" - Mirza became a pupil of a merchant

Great-grandmother Dara - Paruz, daughter of a merchant

Grandma Dara - Aba Bie, history teacher

Grandfather Dara - Firuz, artisan, master of sweets

Father Dara - Parviz, Ph.D., professor, mathematician.

Senior aunt - Firusekh, professor, doctor of sciences, historian

Middle Auntie - Banu, Mather of Dara, PhD, historian

Average junior aunt - Paniz, PhD, etymologist

Younger aunt - Shabnam, researcher, philologist, her research inst.i.tutes have closed, now the saleswoman in the Dara shop

Dary's older brother is s.h.i.+r, Ph.D., a mathematician, and a teacher at a training center.

Cousin Behman is the eldest son of Aunt Shabnam, the freight forwarder in the Dara shop, the owner of the Daewoo Damas minibus, 6 liters per 100 km, payload 570 kg.

Cousin Arash - the youngest son of Aunt Shabnam, site developer

Cousin Heider is a financial university student, the second year master's degree is an accountant in his newly-built Organic Food store, Aunt Paniz's eldest son.

Cousin Shapur is a student at the University of Economics, a bachelor of the third year of study, an Internet marketing specialist, the youngest son of Aunt Paniz.

Cousin Shady - is writing a doctoral dissertation on the history of the Silk Road, the eldest son of Aunt Firouzeh.

Cousin Barno - Researcher, PhD in Marketing Training Center, Aunt Firouzeh's youngest daughter

The senior uncle is Navid, the director of a construction company, an architect who builds shops and private houses.

Younger uncle - Derosh, a businessman, director of the company selling devices navigators.

Friend from Chengdu (Sichuan) from China, exchange student - Fang - 23 years.

Jos Aguar - a friend from the Philippines, a historian, cartographer, works in a multimedia company, a representative of the department of "Agro a.n.a.lytics" drones for agriculture - 32 years.

Grandma Makhtab, his Grandmother's friend, lives in a mountain village, the head of a highlander clan, has her own berry field, has a village outlet and can sell her harvest of dried fruits, berries, mulberry flour, and nuts.

Neighbor house - Nima (fair).

Baraz is a pensioner, a retired police officer, aged 70 years. It is engaged in private carrying.

Grandpa Kamar is a neighbor of Grandma Makhtab, grows apricots, peaches, grapes of three varieties, keeps mulberry groves. Age - 76 years. Retired colonel, fire brigade.

Grandpa Kamol - a neighbor of Makhtab's grandmother, has a family section of mountain nuts, bushes of pistachio, rosehip, gra.s.s deer, mint. Collector of healing herbs. Pharmacist. Hobbies - local history. Candidate of Medical Sciences. Age 65 years.

Uncle Bekhruz is a neighbor of Makhtab's grandmother, he has berry fields, vineyards, nuts, he grows roots, medicinal plants, he has his own garden with roses. Yes, and blanks of them.

Farmer Masa - the nephew of grandfather Kamol, lives 7 km from the cottage Darya. He has his own farm, growing potatoes, onions, garlic, broccoli, cauliflower. Farm in 40 hectares. He has his own mechanical workshop, three tractors, two seeders, two trucks, a rain plant. Age - 48 years. Bachelor. What is not typical for the countryside. Former lecturer at the University of Agronomy.

Extra Heroes

s.h.i.+r - a motorcycle with a sidecar

Litlle Li - Small Hydro Electric Power Station

Suhrab - tractor

Dilshadu - Copter

Young sister - Copper Coin "Jiang" from the novel "'Jiang' Magic Coin"

The elder sister - the Jiang Bronze Coin from the novel "'Jiang' Magic Coin" has not yet appeared in the novel.

Farmer Masa - the nephew of grandfather Kamol, lives 7 km from the cottage Dary. He has his own farm, engaged in the cultivation of potatoes, onions, garlic, broccoli, cauliflower. Farm in 40 hectares. He has his own mechanical workshop, three tractors, two seeders, two trucks, a rain plant. Age - 48 years. Bachelor. What is not typical for the countryside. Former lecturer at the University of Agronomy.

Chad is familiar with his shop there, he sells tea, he has two farms, one for growing tea bushes, and the other he is growing there just by cabotage. he is a philologist by profession, but he lived in j.a.pan for a long time in Nara, then settled in the Kansai region, started a farm ... then he opened five tea shops. I started with Facebook sales ... and then I started to open branches in different countries. Chad, managed to write two books on gardening in j.a.pan, as well as write a book on types of j.a.panese teas, published a collection of hockey and a tank. And after he managed to write a book on j.a.panese sweets.

Yos.h.i.+dsan, Promotional and Technological a.s.sistance Manager for Farmers.

a.s.sortment for sale:

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- candy of black currant, gooseberry, raspberry, sea buckthorn

- marshmallow of apples with protein according to the Tula recipe

- dried fruits obtained in a natural way, dried in the sun, without adding sulfur namely (apricot, peach, apples, raspberries, currants, yellow grapes, plums)

- walnuts, pistachio and almonds

- flour from pounded dry mulberry

- dried persimmon

- crystal sugar from grape juice and berries

- amber sugar and syrup.

- carrot jam.

- sweet almonds with crystalline sugar

- almond jam

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- ginger jam.

- Jam from grapes.

- jam from rose petals.

- Root -

- Pasternak

- Fennel

- Celery

- Parsley

- Ginger

- Chicory

- Other plants-

- Luffa

- Asparagus

- Artichokes

- Berries -

- Irga

- Strawberries

- Strawberry

- Raspberries

- Currant

- Gooseberry,

- Sea buckthorn

- Blueberry

- Fezalis

- turn

- Medlar.

- Fruits -

- apples

- pears

- cherries

- cherry

- plum

- mulberry (red, black, white).

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Seed prices:

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By the way, the culinary variety, what are its characteristics? It ripens in 3 months, the yield is 297 kg with 1 ap, the weight of each root is about 150 grams.

Strawberries prices from 40 to 70 dollars. Chicory - $ 128 for 1 kg, Lyuffa - $ 140 for 1 kg 250 grams, fennel - $ 12 for 1 kg, artichoke $ 350 for 1 kg, and one piece is sold for $ 40, weighing 1 kg! Therefore, the price is appropriate! Strawberries for 30 dollars per kg, and raspberries for 36 dollars, shadberry for 60 dollars, black currants for 50 dollars, fesalis for 125 dollars, sea buckthorn for 45 dollars,

The price of goods in the online store:

Opening the product page, Dara saw photos of the packaged goods, their description, weight, and price.

Paper bags with sweet almonds, 100 grams each, price $ 2.

Marzipan ma.s.s of 1 kg for 8 dollars from almonds.

Peeled pumpkin seeds of 500 grams - cost $ 5.

Peeled watermelon seeds of 200 grams - $ 4.

Peeled sunflower seeds 300 grams - $ 6.

Pistachios on 100 grams - 4 dollars.

Pistachio marzipan ma.s.s of 1 kg for 15 dollars.

Bars of sunflower seeds with honey pressed 75 grams at a price of 1 dollar, with watermelon, pumpkin, sunflower.

450 grams of dry fruit bags of persimmon, peach, grapes, raspberries, black currants, brown grapes, cherries, plums, mulberries each for $ 4.

A bag with a mixture of all dry fruits and berries in 450 grams worth $ 5.

With an indication of how to use them, in what recipes to use, how to prepare infusions, decoctions, what diseases to use, what side effects they have.

Hashtak oriental sweetness made from apricot, honey, grapes, walnut, four kinds. With pistachio 14 pieces in each box for $ 2, with almonds for $ 3, with walnuts for $ 1.5, with apricot kernels for $ 1.

Hashtak from dried figs, with grapes, apricots, almonds, 14 pieces each, priced at 5 dollars.

Dried figs, Iranian, it is smaller compared to that from Small An in 450 gram sachets for $ 7.

A box with a selection of a.s.sortment of hashtak - with apricots, figs, peeled pistachios, almonds, walnuts, apricot kernels, small bars of pumpkin seed, watermelon, sunflower, dry raspberries. Gift, weighing 350 grams - the price of 15 dollars. Export option, each product in a separate package. As is customary in the global market. Inscriptions in two languages ​​- Persian and English. If desired, the supplier can change English into Russian or Chinese.

Plastic box weighing 450 grams with the same set, the price of $ 3, the usual non-export version.

In gla.s.s jars in 250 ml - bekmes from boiled juice - mulberry, pear, grapes, black currant, persimmon, the price of the export version for $ 10 and for the domestic market for $ 2.

The difference between the export version and the fact that for the domestic market in containers, for the first one it is made of porcelain, for the second one of gla.s.s.

In jars of irish this boiled juice with cake jars of 350 ml with the same fruits, the price is respectively $ 15 and $ 4.

Sumalak - boiled wheat sprouts of 400 ml each, the price is 2 dollars, the term of consumption is 10 days.

Amber sugar - 1 kg for 25 dollars, only 50 kg in stock.

Carrot jam with honey as a preservative, term use within 1 month, 350 ml, the price for export is $ 10 for the domestic market at $ 1.5.

Rose petal jam, 250 ml, shelf life 1 year, price 10 dollars for both domestic and foreign markets.

Our local, simply dried juice from fruits and berries under the sun, makes us taste Karakot. Black currant, gooseberry, raspberry, sea buckthorn, pears, apples and combined with the addition of pumpkin seeds, watermelon, sunflower, almond nuts, pistachio, walnut and basil with mint. Weighing 35 grams, there is 350 grams in a box, there are both a.s.sorted and a.s.sorted ones - the price is 6 dollars.

Pastila with protein from apples - each pastila 35 grams, only 350 grams - the price is $ 25. Export option. For the domestic market - marshmallow 20 grams, the weight of the box is 240 grams with the price of 5 dollars.

At the same time, how do I remember the purchase price has not changed?

Yes, we agreed to buy at $ 6 and 50 cents, and the cost itself is obtained for 1 kg of pastila about $ 2, that is, $ 4.5 dollars the village put in your pocket and we respectively sell 350 grams at $ 25. But we still need to cover the cost of purchasing equipment and other things. So all is fair.

Flour from a mulberry - for 500 grams - 6 dollars.

Additional information about the farm and the house:

It was a kind of buffer zone remote from urban roads, highways. The first zone is the dacha town, the second zone is 2-5 hectares of farms, the third is cottages and farms of 40 ares, the fourth is small plots of land of 2-3 ares.

Three plots of land.

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The first plot is 45 km from the capital, 2 hectares of land. Across the river, 5 km from it, there was a second section with 40 ares, a two-story boron house. Location - foothills, height above sea level in 550 - 580 meters. Nearby there is a mountain river, at a stone bed, 10 meters wide, 3 meters deep near the sh.o.r.e, about 70 cm in the middle.

The second section was located 5 km from the first, lying 600 meters above sea level. is he

It was equipped with industrial and drinking water, electricity was carried out. But because of the old infrastructure, which has not been replaced for the last 30 years, it turned off for 5-7 hours in rainy or snowy weather. Yes, the second site was located backup generator 800 kW, diesel fuel. For water and light, you had to buy kilowatts and cubic meters for three months before. 200 kilowatts per person per 1 month and the price for them was 40 cents per 1 kilowatt, 1 cubic meter of water cost 35 cents, per person 50 cubes per month. Next to the farm were the dacha plots of university professors. They were about 15. Facilities - toilet in the yard. Recently, they were replaced by "bio toilets." On a plot of 40 ares there was a small warehouse for tools and garden tools.

500 meters from the farm in 40 are. The house itself was located on a plot of 16 ar, of which 6 ar occupied by a two-storied, wooden, prefabricated, Finnish house. He was with fire protection coating. Also on this site was a garage for three cars and a small warehouse and toilet.

Near the house there were several fruit trees - two black mulberries, three white mulberries, two pear trees. From the back side, one unabi tree grew.

House. On the first floor there was a hall, dining room, study, small kitchen, on the second floor there are two bedrooms and a library.

In the hallway there was a coat rack and a bedside table for shoes. Inside the house, people walked in slippers. On the hanger nailed to the wall of the house, hung raincoats, umbrellas, hats, near the hanger on the floor proudly topped rubber boots, attribute farmer, a pair of sneakers, galoshes ...

Immediately from the hallway, a large dining room began, in the center of the room there was a large oak table and around it fifteen chairs. Previously, it was relatively cheap, about 4 professors' salaries, now it was no longer a permissible luxury. At that time, 24 years ago, the prices of goods were not very high, while professors had high salaries, utilities were stable, prices were low for them, they grew only once in 5 years. And not like now 3-4 times a year. And the professors' salaries were only about $ 300, whereas real wooden furniture cost at least $ 6,000.

On both sides of the table were cabinets with dishes, tablecloths, towels and cutlery. Cla.s.sic European style. And not the usual Asian household. It is much simpler than a European one, several large bowls for soups, several small bowls for tea, teapots are no longer in fas.h.i.+on, a thermos bottle is enough, an electric kettle, a dozen plates, steel cutlery, a set of wooden chopsticks, a couple of porcelain bowls for salads. Two chef's knives. Steamer, one cast-iron pan, one cast-iron pot, two steel pans. A tablecloth for a long time no one uses.

But in this house everything was different. Grandma Aba Bie appreciated tradition. The tablecloth was starched white, with a crystal vase in the center of the table.

On the other side of the table were wide and comfortable sofas and armchairs, next to which were placed two coffee tables, on which coffee cups were usually placed, with saucers and spoons. Small vases with cookies, sweets, jam and sliced ​​lemon. As it is usual in our region, there were no alcoholic beverages. Ordinary drinks are green tea, black tea, herbal tea, less often boiled water with lemon, sorbet, compotes, jelly. To which they serve bread, dry fruits, nuts, seeds, jam, kiyami, bekmesy, rychaly, oriental sweets, halvah, fresh berries and fruits.

Then he went to the office, he was on the right of the dining room and was hiding behind an inconspicuous wooden panel. In the center of the room was a large table, it was equipped with two laptops, at the bottom there was uninterrupted power for 3 hours, three routers, two filters ... a data storage system for 2 Petabytes ... only 10 to 15 ...

Around bookcases with textbooks, monographs, problem books, old books, maps of vegetation, land use, soil maps, land, some kind of tables. A laser projector was suspended above. An interactive whiteboard was installed on the wall. Near the table stood a luxurious and large leather chair, and on the right about five large chairs.

A wide staircase with railings led to the second floor. A small corridor led to three rooms. Two small bedrooms with windows overlooking the mountains. The windows were reinforced, and there were lattices on them. The house had a security system ...

The room had three single beds, two bedside tables, one small table and four chairs, two wardrobes for clothes and bed linen. As well as a sink with hot and cold water.

The second bedroom was with a large bed, one table and five chairs, one s.p.a.cious wardrobe and a chest of drawers.

The largest room on the second floor was the library ...

The third section was located 3 km to the south-east, from a farm of 40 ares, at an alt.i.tude of 659 meters. An area of ​​2-3 ar. He was fenced net. Near him Dara wanted to put 10 local felt yurt ...

In 5 km from the first site to the north-west there was a country house with one and two storey houses. And 40 km from the capital was this town. With a total of 160 houses. With two main streets and about six side. About 47 people lived in the dacha village, there was a polyclinic left over from the best of times. It employed two nurses and one therapist and one dentist. Children professors. There was also a small police station with five officers and two patrol cars. Its fire part with one machine. There used to be more of them, but when the science campus was closed ... the research center, the research inst.i.tute and a couple of laboratories were transferred from it further south. Only one science laboratory remained ... At an alt.i.tude of 489 meters.

It was a former science campus. In the summer, the children and grandchildren of professors came from the city and then the population increased to 200 people.

In total there were several types of sites. These are country houses of a scientific town of 12 acres, farms for conducting experiments on 2-5 hectares, country houses of 16 acres and 40 acres of farms, as well as small test plots of 2-3 acres at a distance from farms 3 km from the southeast .

Previously, these were all test sites for background monitoring and studying the quality and purity of fruits, berries and vegetables. There used to be such a state program for the production of environmentally friendly products for citizens ...

It was a kind of buffer zone remote from urban roads, highways. The first zone is the dacha town, the second zone is 2-5 hectares of farms, the third is cottages and farms of 40 ares, the fourth is small plots of land of 2-3 ares.

From the suburban area and the farm in the third zone, the relief was represented by small hills, a couple of tens of meters flowed a mountain river, carefully laid by the hands of the builders in the stone bed. There was also a small hydroelectric power station, which provided electricity ...

Placement of garden and garden crops on 40 ares:

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1. Pasternak root crop - 3 weave, yield 300 centners + 30% increase in yield from micronutrients (as his relative promised)

2. Fennel root vegetable - 2 weave, yield 400-500 kg.

3. Chicory - 3 weave, harvest 160 kg.

4. Luffa - 2 weave, harvest 434 kg.

5. Artichoke - 3 weaving, yield from 50 to 100 kg.

6. Cabot gourd - 4 weave, yield - 400 kg.

7. Irga berries - 2 weave, crop - 250 kg.

8. Strawberry berries - 2 weave, harvest 290 kg.

9. Strawberry berry - 2 weave, harvest 200 kg.

10. Raspberry berry - 2 weave, harvest 200-300 kg.

11. Black currant berry - 2 weave, harvest 150 kg.

12. Sea buckthorn berry - 4 weave, from 150 to 300 kg.

13. Fezalis –2 weave, yield 200 kg.

14. Watermelon - 7 acres, yield 300 kg.

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Thoughts of magic

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In particular, I had a problem, how should the coin appear? How should its disappear?

An anomaly appeared ... it was investigated ... a coin was drawn ... if it was left at Dara ... then it would be taken away with a high degree of probability ... clans ... it could be stolen ... they might have a rift with Bro how to share?

As follows from the cliche of the novels, as soon as someone tries to put something up for auction ... it attracts the attention of many forces, sometimes far from being friendly.

In the East, there is a saying in the East - that money, like great projects, loves silence!

It follows that the coin should disappear? But how?

Bronze, in principle, can quietly lie in the ground and 3000 and 4000 years ...

So the coin had to be in some special conditions in order to be affected by erosion processes, humidity, high or, on the contrary, cold temperatures ?!

If we a.s.sume that this is not quite bronze, but the material obtained from a meteorite ... then ... such a coin from a mechanical point of view should not be destroyed ... even if it is corroded ...

Here you do not know how to make a coin disappear from a realistic point of view? !!!

If you describe the usual way, the real one, then it will turn out too, dry and boring ... but how to transfer the magic power of the coin to the main character Dara ???

We'll have to use the template and the cliche in the novels ... a coin in contact with his blood, when he "accidentally" at the will of the coin cut a finger ... blood and metal came in contact ... and the coin underwent a powerful process of corrosion and ... crumbled in the hands of Dara ... at the same time a part of the metal from the coin got into his blood in the form of dust ... or did "some kind of force" come out of the coin and enter the blood vessels of the Gifts ???

He did not see this, as he did not yet possess magic power, but at the moment when the coin fell apart, his hand radiated light. What color question? Red? Yellow? Blue? Green? Turquoise? There are more questions than answers ...

At the same time, his strength has not yet fully manifested ... since he did not know the trigger mechanism ...

"How to activate? You just have to touch the fingers of your left and right hands at the same time with the words" tun "and" Princ.i.p.ality of He ". Then the inconspicuous needles pierce your skin. But this is not enough to activate the coin. high mountain gorges, or it grows in the steppe among the nomads.This is gra.s.s, it is healing, called "Deer Gra.s.s." The most powerful in energy, from the great mountain - mountainous land - Aertai Shanmai. you need to collect early in the morning. And then cook in the boiler, It glows with sugar, but that's not all I should add -.! mint that grows in the water of a mountain stream, cherry leaf, apple flowers, a dried berry apricot drink then this tea, but not hot and the heat only if the action coins manifested "...

It is possible that with the time of 1400 years, the triggering mechanism could have changed ... such as from this time, the embossing print fell from it? rescued the defense cover? and the strength of the coin freed? part of which went to the farm soil? and the other part remained in the coin? the question is which part was larger, which went into the soil or which remained in the coin?

The trigger mechanism was not only the blood of Dara. but some kind of "chemical reaction". Which one? Maybe for example, they made him a column post-vaccine, and she, having reacted with blood and the power of a coin, accidentally launched this magic power?

Does it sound ridiculous? But so far I have only such options ...

Or maybe add that bro Fang, a descendant of Lee Ban? And maybe leave the intrigue and a descendant will appear later ... and maybe not appear at all?

Sometimes, as readers, we criticize authors for using faded cliches, literary techniques, moving away from the mainstream ... but as an author ... I think this is a good help to get out of a complex creative problem ... how to get a novel out of dead end ???

As one friend of mine told a programmer, modern writers sometimes just use our work. We write to them programs that write novels ... we select the words we need, synonyms, anonymous, compose grammatical compositions, describe the basic psychological reactions of people, for example, anger, joy, emotion, proving of certain actions in certain situations. We set the list of heroes, characters of the second plan. Also we describe to them landscapes, interiors and other ...

The machine then, like the bot, chooses the text according to our algorithms and writes it ... like a couple of hundred volumes of Star Trek. We write, we are linguists, programmers! We work out our schemes, programs, and then run them as bots programs ...

You persecute brother !!!

No, I do not drive! I tell you the truth! Then this semi-finished product is processed by writers, philologists and they make finished finished products from it. By the quality of the content, it draws on 4 of the conditional 10 point score. But such content is in demand in the modern market. Especially if you need volume and not quality ...

But this is not interesting!

How to say? Maybe the reader is not interested, but programmers are entertaining for us!

Well, I'm not a programmer, Ms. and such a program is probably expensive, so ... I have to think ... and here are ready-made tools to help get out of a difficult situation ...

In ordinary manga or novels, about farming, medicine, cooking, all the usual procedures are omitted ... and this is in practice such a headache. Registration, obtaining permits, licenses, so I wanted to leave it in the novel.

The magic abilities are different from the typical manifestations in manga ... well, in real life it does not work ...

Do I need to do ancient magic with the ability to upgrade? Do I need to introduce a magic control system? Like in games? Or leave the opportunity to manage it on a mental level?

Well, apparently, I will solve this for myself as I write. I have already spoken ... voiced problems and it became clearer how to start writing ...

Thank you for the opportunity to share with you your thoughts and the East is truly wise!